Saturday, March 13, 2010

The Red Tree


1) How did the story make you feel?
This story makes me sorrow and sad because at the beginning of story, the girl was hopeless. However, in the end of the story, the girl got hope and vigor. I was glad about that. Also, i learned, hope is very important thing in humans lives.
2) How did you relate to the story?
I got that all people suffered by stress sometimes, and i have to overcome it.
3) What is your red tree?
My red tree is 'Attain to my goal in future' There are no hope if i reach my goal.
4) What makes you happy and hopeful?
My mind and my brain makes me hopeful, when i am getting trouble, my mind give comfort to me. So, i get confidence and be brave for my life. My friends and family make me happy, when i talk with them i getting better.

3 comments:

  1. Be careful with your capitalization!

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  2. it was good writing. however you made some mistake on "the" or sometimes...

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  3. I think you do good but you need to focus on capitalization, and you should focus on the second question I can'[t understand I think you should fixed

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